Torque and Chrome

How good are these lyrics... not my normal style but i like it..?

i usually only write about occurences in my life.. but this is more of jus how i feel in my head more than stuff actually goiin on.. tell me what u think sometimes feelin crazy like im locked inna cube with not an inch to move without even a bite of food and worst of all no ipod to lissen too my mind on lock and the handcuffs are too like a tiger in the zoo runner without a shoe bare foot in the game blisters growin by the twos its time to plan the escape anyone got an idea oh i forget im the only 1 in here im lost without a clue captain jack tryna find a treasure chest but nowhere can i find the X of course no girl to have some sex so what do i do next i kno im the best but i cant finda way outta this damn mess call 911? naah i lost my phone lost it? yeaah now i cant even text mah girl waitin back at home thers no company here im soo alone like im layin inna empty georgia dome like the heart offa kid inna foster home no one wants him cuz 14 years is far too old beatin my head on the wall made of stone gettin brain damage like sylvester stallone yall braggin about ur rims bein custom chrome well the only thing on me thas made of chrome is the chain locked round my ankle bone and yall wearin that cheap cologne im wearin the smell of unknown someone call the wife and my kids cuz dinner tonite is gon be postoned but dont wait to long cuz daddy mite never b home im locked inside this house of stone layin on my rock bed like fred flinestone i feel like hell is wher imma b thrown jamel... i deff feel what ur sayinn.. normally i write more structured and with more meaning, i'll post more later

Public Comments

1. same problem as jus allah
2. Sound like some like a lower average to average level freestyle, or just some crazy ish you wrote cause you wanted to. If you wrote these lyrics in the mind that they were to be taken very seriously, and the were worthy of being a verse to an actual rap song, no. But like I said they're lower average to average, not horrible or even bad.